Make-over of a beautiful young woman who is sicncerely ill.
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Martin, in my opinion, the face of model is too mutch covered with hair. Tilting the head and looking down would make this image more justified.
Regarding your logo appears, as Matthias said, it is a little bit too dominant. And he is right.
Have a nice week end.
Best regards,
Sergey.
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dolphin-e 29. November 2019, 22:30
Martin, in my opinion, the face of model is too mutch covered with hair. Tilting the head and looking down would make this image more justified.Regarding your logo appears, as Matthias said, it is a little bit too dominant. And he is right.
Have a nice week end.
Best regards,
Sergey.
Matthias Moritz 25. März 2019, 9:56
A fine portrait. Eye-catching.However, in my opinion your logo appears a little bit too dominant.